Ooh, is this a sequel to Sleepers Wake? They seem to be connected. ^^ The sparkly heart stickers were a nice touch; I can already imagine Trucy sticking them on, it's such a heartwarming scene. That scene would actually look good as fanart, come to think of it. :3

I'm not a big fan of the pacing, but the attention to detail and the subtlety are definitely worth it. Also, the idea of Godot as a babysitter. ^^