http://withpractice_ff.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] withpractice-ff.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] foxysquidalso 2010-11-30 09:05 pm (UTC)

I think I'm falling in love with you a little bit, honestly.

There's a sort of dream-like quality to this story, I think it's in the rhythm of your phrasing. Which is so perfect, I feel like I think Apollo must have felt, sort of lulled while also inexplicably nervous.

And your young!Apollo, he's so perfect. God, I thought I was going to die when he started calling her Clams.

Also, the Hobo. I laughed out loud twice: once at Miles Edgeworth knowing everything, and once at "The dog's name is obviously Clams." I could listen to the three of them banter all day.

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