Somehow I didn't expect it, but maybe I should have. The whole story was beautiful, but more than that it truly worked for Vera. She's a character I haven't really seen you explore in writing before, yet you got into her head perfectly and managed to portray her feelings so fittingly. Especially towards Kristoph and her dependance. Oh, and the nail biting to. This might be a bit to much information but I also have a nail biting issue for various reasons and it isn't something you can just tell someone to stop and expect results. You really got that with her. hearing someone asking you not to does have a pretty big effect though, so highlighting that piece of him telling her not to worked. But, I'm rambling about a little thing - the story as a whole was wonderful. It was nice to see Vera get a happy ending, as well as sort of filling her dream to meet one of the Gramaryes - Vera & Trucy forever, man. :3
The finished picture looks beautiful as well, lovely to see the outfits in colour. And Trucy's smiling face really looks great - you've got that expression looking so nautral.
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Somehow I didn't expect it, but maybe I should have. The whole story was beautiful, but more than that it truly worked for Vera. She's a character I haven't really seen you explore in writing before, yet you got into her head perfectly and managed to portray her feelings so fittingly. Especially towards Kristoph and her dependance. Oh, and the nail biting to. This might be a bit to much information but I also have a nail biting issue for various reasons and it isn't something you can just tell someone to stop and expect results. You really got that with her. hearing someone asking you not to does have a pretty big effect though, so highlighting that piece of him telling her not to worked. But, I'm rambling about a little thing - the story as a whole was wonderful. It was nice to see Vera get a happy ending, as well as sort of filling her dream to meet one of the Gramaryes - Vera & Trucy forever, man. :3
The finished picture looks beautiful as well, lovely to see the outfits in colour. And Trucy's smiling face really looks great - you've got that expression looking so nautral.