This is so ethereal and amazing-- I can't believe someone wrote this for me... I just sat there reading it with my mouth hanging open and so, so much love.
Also, it fits into canon perfectly. My own personal headcanon goes something along those lines, but I love the way you brought in Vongole (Clams!) and all of it is so very believable. You've added a new dimension to everything here and it's stunning.
And the dialogue is just so damned believable. God, it's perfect. I also loved the way you handled sexuality in this-- that conversation with Kristoph and Apollo coming out was beautiful. And then Kristoph's jealousy towards Apollo dating, and his trasnferred interest in Klavier-- it was there but subtly done.
You also dealt with something hardly anyone does: Apollo being capable of anger, and the shift from anger to fear was so humanly perfect and realistic-- I'm just so, so impressed.
Thankyou, once again. I've been having a really lousy time of it lately and waking up to this has just put me in the best of moods. You're awesome.
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Date: 2010-11-30 10:13 pm (UTC)This is so ethereal and amazing-- I can't believe someone wrote this for me... I just sat there reading it with my mouth hanging open and so, so much love.
Also, it fits into canon perfectly. My own personal headcanon goes something along those lines, but I love the way you brought in Vongole (Clams!) and all of it is so very believable. You've added a new dimension to everything here and it's stunning.
And the dialogue is just so damned believable. God, it's perfect. I also loved the way you handled sexuality in this-- that conversation with Kristoph and Apollo coming out was beautiful. And then Kristoph's jealousy towards Apollo dating, and his trasnferred interest in Klavier-- it was there but subtly done.
You also dealt with something hardly anyone does: Apollo being capable of anger, and the shift from anger to fear was so humanly perfect and realistic-- I'm just so, so impressed.
Thankyou, once again. I've been having a really lousy time of it lately and waking up to this has just put me in the best of moods. You're awesome.