That scene with the answering machine and Kristoph pushing the button over and over! OMG! That was excellent. I loved the build up of this, the, as someone else called it, dream-like element to the entire story. I feel like you took us through Apollo's strange experience with Kristoph emotionally as well as narratively. I also think the physical relationship with them was well done, very creepy. I loved Apollo's moment of realization of why he was so emotionless.
Also, the relationship with Apollo and Clams is adorable! As was the Edgeworth encounter. And, your Phoenix is pitch perfect as always. Adore him to death.
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Date: 2010-12-01 04:13 am (UTC)Also, the relationship with Apollo and Clams is adorable! As was the Edgeworth encounter. And, your Phoenix is pitch perfect as always. Adore him to death.
Fantastic story. Thank you for sharing.