If you would like to be my mate, let me know at once. I will then be able to judge where to proceed from there.
Haha, there are so many, many lines I could reference as favorites from this gem of a story, but I'm sticking with my choice! Oh, the Romantic Comedy of it all!
Your characterization is dead-on, your dialogue is sparkling, your jokes are snapping, and the kissing part is hot as all hell! FIVE STARS OUT OF A POSSIBLE FIVE ♥
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Date: 2011-01-04 05:58 am (UTC)Haha, there are so many, many lines I could reference as favorites from this gem of a story, but I'm sticking with my choice! Oh, the Romantic Comedy of it all!
Your characterization is dead-on, your dialogue is sparkling, your jokes are snapping, and the kissing part is hot as all hell!
FIVE STARS OUT OF A POSSIBLE FIVE ♥